Thursday, June 30, 2011

rate my lyrics - by jack edwards . 12-13 years old?

ima hit this beat let em no now im the beast
ima cook this wanna bes in oil for my feast
i got a hit list on waiting to murder these other mc's
yeah - ive got a studio in the back bass broken from the beats
in a accepella and then ima rip it like im the shizzle
then ima make your lyrics cook in with you and then sizzle
ive been doing this quite a while so ima never quit soon
people say there high in the sky but im on top of the moon
Rate Out of 10 :) Shweett !
Dont Judge me if you dont like the lyrics Just give me some feedback
and just let me no if you like it or not - if you dont tell me how to
improve :) Thanks

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